I need help with redoing this assignment. I have attached the assignment itself and along the brainstorming that was to support the assignment. My instructor feedback “Your topic and title don’t mesh together. You should have more references Your hook does not connect with your essay title. Your mapped thesis doesn’t follow your introduction. This paper does not have a focus to it. I also have attached a blank assignment sheet
This 1-2 page paper will allow you to watch an example of an outside speaker and evaluate their performance. You will also begin to apply some of the
This 1-2 page paper will allow you to watch an example of an outside speaker and evaluate their performance. You will also begin to apply some of the ideas and concepts we have covered up to this point to determine what you can learn from the outside speaker. You will