I need help with redoing this assignment. I have attached the assignment itself and along the brainstorming that was to support the assignment. My instructor feedback “Your topic and title don’t mesh together. You should have more references Your hook does not connect with your essay title. Your mapped thesis doesn’t follow your introduction. This paper does not have a focus to it. I also have attached a blank assignment sheet
Week 7 Assignment | Final Project – Event Critical Assessment This project/paper incorporates the core concepts learned in this course and demonstrates an
Week 7 Assignment | Final Project – Event Critical Assessment This project/paper incorporates the core concepts learned in this course and demonstrates an understanding of Sports Event Management. Over the course of these eight weeks you must select a sport event to attend and provide a critical assessment of the