I need help with redoing this assignment. I have attached the assignment itself and along the brainstorming that was to support the assignment. My instructor feedback “Your topic and title don’t mesh together. You should have more references Your hook does not connect with your essay title. Your mapped thesis doesn’t follow your introduction. This paper does not have a focus to it. I also have attached a blank assignment sheet
follow the steps below:Read the section titled Quick Tip: The Quickest Revision Strategy located in Chapter 17: Revising Style: Telling Your Story
follow the steps below: Read the section titled Quick Tip: The Quickest Revision Strategy located in Chapter 17: Revising Style: Telling Your Story Clearly of your textbook (p. 101). Using the steps outlined in this section, revise any two of your body paragraphs in your argumentative paper. In this discussion forum, post your two body