I need help with redoing this assignment. I have attached the assignment itself and along the brainstorming that was to support the assignment. My instructor feedback “Your topic and title don’t mesh together. You should have more references Your hook does not connect with your essay title. Your mapped thesis doesn’t follow your introduction. This paper does not have a focus to it. I also have attached a blank assignment sheet
Respond to the following questions in a one-page essay format. This means your assignment should be written like a paper. Please DO NOT list the question
Respond to the following questions in a one-page essay format. This means your assignment should be written like a paper. Please DO NOT list the question, and then write the answer, that is question and answer format, not essay format. Be sure to follow the writing expectations of this course