I need help with redoing this assignment. I have attached the assignment itself and along the brainstorming that was to support the assignment. My instructor feedback “Your topic and title don’t mesh together. You should have more references Your hook does not connect with your essay title. Your mapped thesis doesn’t follow your introduction. This paper does not have a focus to it. I also have attached a blank assignment sheet
Have a disuss due for my capstone class further detail s to be discussed upon acceptance
Have a disuss due for my capstone class further detail s to be discussed upon acceptance