I need help with redoing this assignment. I have attached the assignment itself and along the brainstorming that was to support the assignment. My instructor feedback “Your topic and title don’t mesh together. You should have more references Your hook does not connect with your essay title. Your mapped thesis doesn’t follow your introduction. This paper does not have a focus to it. I also have attached a blank assignment sheet
i want you to write about this We had a topic expressive therapies for mental health & well being so we have to write the challenges or ease of research
i want you to write about this We had a topic expressive therapies for mental health & well being so we have to write the challenges or ease of research that you had while deciding how to present your topic and finding information on it. (Write only in 150 words)