ntroduction Paragraph 5/5Thesis statement 2/4Topic Sentences (3) 9/10Evidence/quote selection 10/15Tone, diction, syntax, vocabulary,transitions8/10Grammar/Sentence Structure 9/10Analysis supporting thesis & answering analysis questions28/40Conclusion paragraph 6/6Deductions: -5 no Works Cited pageFinal Grade: 72%. This is for extra credit my grade was 72% . The weakness area was Analysis supporting thesis answeir analyis questions score 28/40. attach below is my essay that need extra credit.
Choosing a Topic Remember, you should be looking at topics that affect a community that you belong to. In the past, my students have written about all so
Choosing a Topic Remember, you should be looking at topics that affect a community that you belong to. In the past, my students have written about all sorts of topics. For example, topics have included: Mental health in the Black community (specifically men) Bullying in a school community (chose a